分享十句英语作文基本模式_惠州星华教育高职高考

接下来惠州星华教育老师给大家分享十句英语作文基本模式，希望对大家有用。

　　　　┌─主题句 句 1
第一段─┤
　开头　└─扩展句 句 2
　　　　┌─主题句 句 3
 
第二段─┤
　正文　├─扩展句 句 4
   ├─扩展句 句 5
   ├─扩展句 句 6
   ├─扩展句 句 7
   ├─扩展句 句 8
   ├─扩展句 句 9
 

第三段 ──结尾句 句10
   结尾
 
【模式解析】
第一段为开头，包括两句。第一句为主题句，必须提出，通过问题点明全文主题；第二句为扩展句，须进一步说明和支持主题句。或是将关系倒过来，由第一句说明情况，第二句提出问题。

第二段为正文，共七句。第一句(句3)为主题句，提出本段的主题，它应与第一段的主题相关和一致；第二句至第七句(句4一句7)为扩展句，说明和支持本段的主题。句与句之间要注意运用好过渡使段落逻辑合理，结构得当。
第三段为结尾，简化为一句，也是全文的总结句，它将前面内容总结为一结果，表明自己的论点。

三段之间的连接要灵活运用“启、承、转、合”的连接过渡手段。

【优秀例文】

Television

Television presents a vivid world in front of us. (1)(主题句)Through TV, we can learn what is happening half way across the world. (2)(扩展句)

Television also plays an important educational role in our daily life. (3)(主题句) For one thing, the TV university provides an opportunity for many young men who can not go to formal universities. (4)(扩展句) For another, children can broaden their scope of knowledge by watching such popular programs as "The Animal World", and "The Mickey Mouse and Duck Donald". (5)(扩展句) Besides, women can learn about the latest fashion of dresses and the best recipe for making fruit cakes. (6)(扩展句) Furthermore, we learn many world advanced technologies from TV programs such as computer and telecommunication. (7)(扩展句) And also we can learn singing, dancing and doing physical exercises in some special TV training courses.

(8)(扩展句) In short, the effect of TV's educational role is becoming more and more obvious. (9)(扩展句)

Having viewed these several aspects, and with many more TV programs being produced,I believe that our life will become even more significant. (10)(总结句)
 

【教师点评】

1．本文是一篇典型的十句作文，主题句“Television presents a vivid world in front of us”点明了文章的主题，其他句子均围绕它进行扩展。扩展句（句2—9）内容详实，结束句（句10）总结性和概括性很强。整篇文章层次清晰，充分体现了十句作文法的特点。
 
2．较好地使用了大量的连接词，如for one thing, for another, besides, furthermore, and also等，另外，in short的使用也使结论更加清晰，概括更加明了。
 
3．最后的总结句富有创意，利用分词短语的形式把上下文连贯起来，体现了作者对英语句式的灵活应用，避免了一般性的概括语，很有特点。
 
4．使用了较高级的词汇句型，不单调，像宾语从句（what is happening halfway across the world，our life will become more significant），定语从句（who can not go to formal university）,分词短语（by watching…，for making fruit cakes, having viewed these aspects），重点短语（plays an important educational role, provide…for…），高级单词（present, broaden, scope）和with复合结构（with many more TV programs produced）等，这些都极大地提升了文章的档次。

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